Circles of Stone

Diary of a Novel on Its Way to Publication

This will be the final entry in this diary. Thanks to those of you who have tracked this process over the last two years (the first entry was October 2001).

November 10--I received an additional 40 copies to cover two books events I have planned on the weekend of Nov. 15 (Borders Books) and 16 (at my parish church). The error in the spelling of my last name has been corrected! All is well again. Circles of Stone's Amazon.com ranking is now 1.2 million (and moving closer to #1).

October 15, 2003--I received my authors copies along with 42 additional copies I will keep in my "stash" for incidental sales. I'm shocked to discover that my last name is still misspelled on the spine of the book. The publisher promises a quick fix to this lingering problem. Fortunately, Hilliard & Harris prints books on a "just in time" basis, rather than thousands at a time. Circles of Stone opened with an Amazon.com ranking of 2.5 million (about as bad as it gets).


October 10, 2003--
At last! Circles of Stone was listed today on both Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble.com. Not all good news. The listings as submitted to the sites by Ingram are as yet incomplete. But they are there. Minor errors will be cleaned up within a few days.
I haven't yet received my author's copies from the publisher, but they should be along any day now.

September 26, 2003--I received word that Circles of Stone was being released "this week," but that the book would not be in the circulation pipeline (Ingram, Baker & Taylor, etc.) for a few weeks. In the meantime, bookstores can purchase books from Hilliard & Harris. What I have learned about bookstores is that they really do not like to go outside their standard distributors. They will, but reluctantly, and sometimes with the result that they do not get books in time for signings, etc. During the coming week, I will have to check with stores where I have signings scheduled to see if they will purchase from H&H or if I should postpone my engagements. An alternative is to get copies from the publisher and sell them to the bookstore myself, but no one likes to do it that way. 

September 16, 2003--I was assured that the book would go to press "tomorrow." With today's amazing printing technology, it's possible to print a book in days, if not hours. 

September 15, 2003--The editor at Hilliard & Harris contacted me with a question about the use of quotes within quotes and how the marks ( ' ") should appear in the text. Talk about dotting "i"s and crossing "t"s! But it's important stuff because the book will be forever cast that way.

September 13, 2003--I spoke with the owner of Diablo Books, Walnut Creek, CA, who told me Circles of Stone had not yet appeared on Ingram Books's (distributor) computer system. She also told me someone had purchased her Advanced Reading Copy (ARC) without her knowing it. The book was on display in the store.

September 12, 2003--I received word from Hilliard & Harris that Circles of Stone would be released "next week."

July 8, 2003--Minor bump in the road. Received notice today that publication of Circles of Stone has been moved to from August to September. The publisher wants to collect as many reviews as possible before releasing the book. If this were my first novel, I'd be frantic, but I've been through this before. It will give me more time to work on my promotional materials. As the saying goes, "You can't push the river" (or something like that).

June 22, 2003--Just by coincidence, I discovered today another typo on the spine of the cover of my book. My last name is misspelled! Just shows you how difficult it is to proofread your own work. The brain is an amazing computer. It wants to fill in missing bits of information to facilitate recognition. This is especially true when you are reading the same text for the hundredth time, as every author does in the course of preparing a manuscript for submission and in checking galleys and proof copies of your book. In this case, I passed over the spelling "Garotto" and could not see the missing second "r." I must admit that I'm not a good detail person. Fine proofreading is a real challenge for me. Moral: when proofreading, take nothing for granted. 

June 1, 2003--I have scoured the ARC for typos and found a few that will be corrected for the final version. I confess I am addicted to tinkering with sentences. Some changes I requested weren't typos, I just wanted to substitute a different word or delete a word from a sentence. All in all, I am thrilled with the book.

After rereading the story for the 500th time, I still like it. I hope you do, too.

May 24, 2003--Today, I received my first copy of the bound paperback version of Circles of Stone. It's every bit as stunning as I expected it to be. It should be an eye-popper at the bookstores. My thanks go to Stephanie A. Reilly at Hilliard and Harris Publishing for a great job on the production end of this adventure. I have a book that I will be proud to promote.

This is an Advanced Reading Copy (Not For Sale) that is now being circulated to media outlets for review. The idea is that the reviews would appear at the same time the book is released. Not several months later. My task is to read the book to see if there are still any typos or other mistakes. It's my last chance to get all the kinks out. My excitement for the August release is really ratcheting up! 

May 21, 2003--I received the final version of the cover. You'll notice that the color is more subdued to let the title stand out better from the background. Also, the book announcement is up on the Hilliard & Harris website at www.hilliardandharris.com/. Take a look. 
We are now expecting an August 2003 release. Am I getting excited yet? Guess.


May 11, 2003--
Today I received proofs of the inside pages for the front and back of the book. (Found only one typo.) This includes the title page, copyright information, dedication page, and author bio (with photo--a first for me!). I also received the ISBN number. Publication date is now set for August/September of this year. I was hoping for early summer but that isn't the best time to be marketing a book. The Fall and Holiday seasons are much better.

The next task for the publisher is to distribute ARCs (Advanced Review Copies). This was scheduled for March, but that's the publishing business for you. The ARCs will go to Publishers Weekly and a range of other book reviewers chosen by H&H and me. The idea is to get some advance buzz going for the book by the time it is available for sale.

Did I tell you yet that Circles of Stone will be published simultaneously in hard cover and trade paperback? The reason is to reach different markets (e.g., libraries like hard cover novels).

March 19, 2003--The galleys and cover art have arrived. I am especially pleased with the cover. What do you think? My task now is to scour the ms. looking for typesetting errors. It's also my last chance to spot any inconsistencies in the text (and I've found a couple). At this point, it's a case of "speak now or forever hold your piece." Cover art and design is by Stephanie A. Reilly.

March 4, 2003--
I received word from my agent and Hilliard & Harris that the galleys and book cover will be sent to me this week. This is always an exciting event in the life of a book. Proofing the galleys* is important because any typos I miss will show up in the final published version. 

Getting your first look at the book cover is scary. I've provided my own general thoughts about the cover (not about specific design, but rather in concept). You want the cover to knock your socks off. Barring that, you hope it's at least a cover you can live with and be proud to show at book signings and other author events. Worst case scenario: it doesn't fit the story at all. In my next posting to this diary, I'll include a picture of the cover. 

As far as I know, we are still on track for a summer publication date.

* Galleys are proofs of the typeset pages exactly as they will appear in the published book, except that they are printed on loose 8 1/2" x 11" sheets.

December 2002--I received Hilliard & Harris's December newsletter listing Circles of Stone on its list of upcoming titles for 2003. I'm looking forward to receiving the galleys in February.

October 31, 2002 (Halloween)--Sue Clark called to inform me that Circles of Stone is scheduled for a June 2003 pub date. Galleys are due in February. In March, the publisher will begin sending out copies for prepublication reviews by industry journals and major newspapers.

September 2002--This is the "dead time" in the publication process. The book is in the publisher's queue, but must wait its turn for attention. What's an author to do? Start working on the next novel. I have two going. One sort of ran out of steam, so I've set it aside. The other is coming along, but first drafts are grueling.

August 2002--At the request of the publisher and my agent, I have begun to send the ms. out for review. 

Peer reviews have begun to come in. To read them, click here.

July 16, 2002--I signed the contract and sent it to my agent to forward on to H&H. What's next? Once the publisher signs the contract and returns it to me, my agent will set up a phone meeting between the editor and me to discuss the book and ways in which we can work together to make this a successful venture for all concerned.

July 8, 2002--I met with my agent. The contract contains no unacceptable terms, so I agree to accept H&H's offer. The only adjustment requested is in the number of free author's copies the publisher will provide.

July  2, 2002--My agent called to tell me that Hilliard & Harris is offering me a contract for publication of Circles of Stone. I am simultaneously ecstatic and disappointed.  I've been itching to test the POD waters. Signing with a professional, commercial publisher is a much better career decision. It provides the added prestige of not having to pay someone to publish my work. My agent and I will review the H&H contract terms when she receives it.

H&H publishes simultaneously in hard cover and paperback. This will be my first hard cover edition.

June 2002--Impatient to get Circles of Stone published, I made an inquiry to Virtualbookworm.com, the highest-rated print-on-demand publisher, who immediately offered a contract. I responded that my agent had the ms. out to one more publisher (Hilliard & Harris)--after a dozen or so rejections--and that they needed two weeks to read the ms. and respond. I said would get back to the POD company once I heard from H&H.

October 2001--I signed with literary agent Sue Clark, of Sue Clark Literary Agency,  to represent Circles of Stone.


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